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  1. LoreMaster

    Thoughts/Critiques for my First City

    @Lore : That's an excellent idea, about the herb garden, and it enchances the storytelling. A great example of "showing" rather than " telling." :) And, @Akamizu, I didn't want it to be dark, just "somber" or "resigned". I actually did use the cracks you mentioned quite extensively, in certain...
  2. LoreMaster

    Thoughts/Critiques for my First City

    One thing I'd like to note for anybody viewing, is that this poorer community is meant to have a "depressed, resigned" feel to it. Not super dark, but drab; colorless if you will. Part of the game's story is a centuries-old war that's wearing away at the lower classes, while the nobility...
  3. LoreMaster

    Thoughts/Critiques for my First City

    Thank you for the input, and I see some of these points. However, you mention the layout as overly organized. I'm not quite clear on how that is an issue... That was actually kind of what I was going for. Aren't many real-life cities planned out like this? Maybe you could explain why organized...
  4. LoreMaster

    Thoughts/Critiques for my First City

    Thanks for the input! My game is meant to be dense in content, once it's done, but not covering a massive landmass, like some I've seen on here. I'll only have about three "large cities" and a few more smaller towns. I'd say you definitely have a point about the roads, too. I'll see what I can do!
  5. LoreMaster

    Thoughts/Critiques for my First City

    I'm somewhat happy with how my first large city map turned out, but I could use some fresh eyes and opinions, particularly on a few things... This is Lower Drumwell, the less affluent of two regions in the overall city. I intentionally made most buildings small and compact as I was going for a...
  6. LoreMaster

    Hail, friends!

    Thanks, everyone, for the warm welcome! Looking forward to it! :)
  7. LoreMaster

    Save Character Ideas

    Maybe an in-universe explanation about quantum-entanglement and alternate realities? (As in transferring your consciousness to an identical body in an alternate timeline where you haven't died yet.) Just a thought. A bit out there though. Could make for some fun dialogue if approached correctly.
  8. LoreMaster

    Hail, friends!

    Greetings! May name is LoreMaster; or, on some sites, Worldbuilder88. I'm fairly new to the program (a few months in) but am enjoying it's flexibility. I've recently begun my first serious game and I can't wait to get feedback from the community here!
  9. LoreMaster

    Some Specific Castle Decor

    I could really use a blue-gold-purple themed tileset of medieval banners, flags, suits of armor, coats of arms, etc... My first serious game is set in a fictional kingdom whose colors are as such, and I would love some tiles to prove my npc's allegiances! Other symbols could include a...
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