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The Character Vincent - The Unnamed Wanderer

DarcHiro

Studious Dark Lord
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Meet Vincent, a young man with no memory.

Vincent is a man found sleeping on a cloud with no recollection of who he is or how he got there. All he can be sure of is that he keeps hearing a weird voice in his head that calls itself The Narrator. The more he wants to learn about himself the more it feels hopeless, like he had no memory to begin with. With a snarky attitude and musical wit, he searches to find himself in a world of mystery and omen.

Vincent is not his name. On his journey through the unknown, he meets a girl named Sarah, she runs up to him practically screaming in his ear yelling and crying "Vincent! Vincent!" She twists him around and surprisingly enough almost kisses him! But that's when she noticed something different about him, the Vincent Sarah knew had a scar on his chin. So just as quickly as she almost kisses him she swiftly punches him in the stomach screaming and yelling "OMG I almost KISSED YOU! WHO ARE YOU!?" However all he can respond with is: "I don't know..." And just as fast as she punched him she begins to pity him and tries to help him on his journey of self discovery, the name Vincent just seems to stick with him.

This is a character I have come up with and I am still developing, I will update more and more telling you about this character. Also I am open to suggestions and positive feedback.
 
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LTN Games

Master Mind
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This captured me right away, I want to explore the character more and that's only a little blurb about him. I would say keep building him up, I would love to see him in a game. I'm not to full of suggestion right now but I'll be keeping an eye on this topic.
 

Macro

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Vincent is a great name. You know, when I heard the plot idea, it reminded me of Tearaway a bit. Now I'm wondering if the Narrator and the player are the same or directly related some how.
 

DarcHiro

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You said you wanted updates!

Vincent is not his name. On his journey through the unknown, he meets a girl named Sarah, she runs up to him practically screaming in his ear yelling and crying "Vincent! Vincent!" She twists him around and surprisingly enough almost kisses him! But that's when she noticed something different about him, the Vincent Sarah knew had a scar on his chin. So just as quickly as she almost kisses him she swiftly punches him in the stomach screaming and yelling "OMG I almost KISSED YOU! WHO ARE YOU!?" However all he can respond with is: "I don't know..." And just as fast as she punched him she begins to pity him and tries to help him on his journey of self discovery, the name Vincent just seems to stick with him.
 

Macro

Pantologist
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Really, both of my favorite names in the same game? The intro already has me laughing.
 

Micro

Dragon Goddess
Damn, Sarah has a lot of mood changes in such a short time ha ha. Poor Vincent, just woke up and gets punched!
 

DarcHiro

Studious Dark Lord
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@Macro Sweet! I thought they were good character names!

@Micro Yeah Sarah is supposed to be a little bipolar XD. Honestly though she has a really sad story that you'll learn in the game.
 

Macro

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Hopefully she gets better later on! Bipolar is a scary disease.
 

DarcHiro

Studious Dark Lord
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Hopefully she gets better later on! Bipolar is a scary disease.
Yeah I have a brother that's bipolar, when I say she's a little bipolar it's just she is VERY emotional.
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Here's an Update!
I just posted the demo for the game, it is in Rpg Maker VX Ace but I will update it later to Rpg Maker MV. So if you want to see a little about my character Vincent, you can play a small preview! Have Fun!
 

Micro

Dragon Goddess
I was gonna try it but I don't have a dropbox account, and I'm too lazy to make one right now. :< Any idea if you can change it to a different host so we don't have to make an account? There are probably a lot of lazy people like me who would try it if not for the signup requirement. (snicker)
 

Micro

Dragon Goddess
Tried it out, offered some suggestions. Can't remember where the thread is though. (snicker) I'll give it another shot after you reply later on.

Overall, nice work so far.
 

DarcHiro

Studious Dark Lord
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This is a temple that Vincent explores when he first wakes up, but he doesn't have any recollection of what happened here.

Vitim Skies Preview.png
 
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